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Another dalliance in my limited free time - playing through Mass Effect Three again and so wishing this could happen :D
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I love the way the characters move, not sayiing everything with words, although those are sweet and poignant, but you can see the scene unfold in your mind and see them moving. I hear the theme playing from Mass Effect 3 soundtrack as I read these tender words that take my breath away and send me to a place where Bioware failed. I so love the style of writing--the heat and the love displayed.
This author is one of my fave fan-fiction authors and I fave just about everything written because of the feeling the words invoke. Dinky-Mew gets the characters into your gut and her version of fem-Shep is very unique and likeable.
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This is absolutely wonderful. This shows a side of Kaidan and Shepard none of us really got to see in the game, and I was so happy when I started reading it. I could already hear "I Was Lost Without You" playing in my head, while this lovely scene played out. Both characters are portrayed beautifully, and it evens humanizes them in a way. Fantastic writing style and attention to detail as well.

Kaidan's proposal is so adorable, and the part where he bumps his head? Just gonna say that is so flipping cute! Great writer, great story! Hope to see more like this one! :heart:
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VideoGamerNerd Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ohhh, this is so beautiful! This is the *best* fanfiction I have read in a long time. I love how unsure Kaidan was, and the part where he bumps his head? Just, ahhhh I love it! :heart:

Bravo! :iconclapplz:
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Dinky-Mew Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Student Writer
Haha thank you ^.^ I like to add in little bits like that because for some reason I always imagine him being quite clumsy... *Shrugs* I think it's from that bit in ME3 where there is a noise and Femshep is like "What was that?" all seriousness and then comes Kaidan's rather meek reply of "I ... uh... tripped. Sorry."

And wow, so wrapped up in saying that I let your huge compliment pass me by. Thank you very much, that means a great deal to me :3
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VideoGamerNerd Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes! Haha, I remember that part! :XD: And I totally agree. He's always wearing that big shiny armor, a knight can't help tripping on it every once in a while. ;P
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21gracie Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013
So sweet!! And I love how you describe how they move. Sometimes in other stories its hard to picture how characters move, but you do really nicely at that!!
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Dinky-Mew Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Student Writer
Aww, thank you - I do love romance writing secretly :D
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21gracie Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Well keep doing it becaus you are so good at it!! And we love reading it!!! ;)
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DesignMomma Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So sweet!
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GyftedA Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
I love how physically descriptive you are. Great work!
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Dinky-Mew Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you, I appreciate the feedback, helps me know where I am going right and wrong in things :D
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BiowareFreak Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
eee~ soo cute XD
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Dinky-Mew Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! I do love a bit of gush writing ha! xx
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BiowareFreak Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hehe the happiness in bioware games is so few and far between it is good to be able to find some light :D x
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